The project I'm assigned to... it's to do with Astra Morgansen.
They're making her rewrite Pure Victory.
It's really terrible. She just sits there and writes and writes, and then they interrupt her and make her read out what she's written, and then they argue with each other about whether it's setting things up properly, and all of them have ideas about what she should do--this kind of scene or a speech by that character or maybe they should have started off by having Amaranth hear a long Proclamation read by some official for Our Lord that would set up something or other that they think should be the Inciting Incident or some rubbish like that.
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Date: 2013-12-31 02:35 am (UTC)They're making her rewrite Pure Victory.
It's really terrible. She just sits there and writes and writes, and then they interrupt her and make her read out what she's written, and then they argue with each other about whether it's setting things up properly, and all of them have ideas about what she should do--this kind of scene or a speech by that character or maybe they should have started off by having Amaranth hear a long Proclamation read by some official for Our Lord that would set up something or other that they think should be the Inciting Incident or some rubbish like that.